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 Cheshire Ravanim (done/custom race)

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Krageta
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PostSubject: Cheshire Ravanim (done/custom race)   Cheshire Ravanim (done/custom race) EmptyFri Sep 09, 2011 11:17 pm

Character you wish to be(name): Cheshire Ravanim (royal)

Character's Gender: female

Character's Race: CUSTOM

Zenni: 500

Powerlevel: 80,200

Stamina: 80, 100

Speed: 80, 150

Alignment: Good

Character's appearance :
A humanoid neko girl with a thin body, but a large set of breast. Her arms look small but she is strong. Around her neck is the royal crest embedded on an iron collar that looks like vines going around her neck like a choker. Her height is around five foot six as her has long legs and arms. Her nails are like black claws. Eyes are red like demon cat eyes. Out from her tailbone is a violet color tail that is white striped. Her violet cat ears stick out the top of her head. As her hair is a fushia color waving down her back with white streaks that match her tail. Her toes have claws on them that are diamond sharp.
Cheshire Ravanim (done/custom race) Purple-hair-anime-2096928-250-346
Cheshire Ravanim (done/custom race) Nozomi.Kiriya.459751

Age: 19

Height: 5’6

Hair Color: Purple with white streeks

Eye Color: red

Side Note: She has a purple and white tail, and purrple and white cat ears.

Characters Techniques:
Power up
Mind reading (touch)
Shapeshift
Ki whip
Invisible binding
(see race)

Planet you want to start on: Earth

Characters story:


Born as a Ravatine she loves her planet more than anything. In her eyes it is more beautiful. Being born as a royal much was expected from her, but she was always in the shadow of her older brother whom was to replace her father when her father passed away. They never saw eye to eye as she thought that slaves should be free but he thought that they should be continued to be mined. The planets she helped make fall, the people one by one lined up to receive the mark. She was normally sent to collect the slaves on some missions whose masters have fallen or do not want them anymore. That is when she got an idea to grab some of her own to start a rebellion. She grew up around soldiers and being trained to be proper at the same time. She was also running from her wedding, she was betrotheed to a noble rava, that beat her and abused her behind the walls. She wasn’t going to allow cruelty to rule anymore.

Grabbing a ship, she left her homeworld to try and better herself. To be stronger than her brother and father so that she could stop the slave trade. Looking at all her records though, she saw that she had ended so many lives as they began in slavery it was more than her brother it seemed. Finding a beautiful planet, Cheshire landed on Earth a planet that looked promising to her. Turning her space pod into a capsule, she knew that her family couldn’t find her here. But same time it meant that she had to come up with some plan incase they track her. The species known as humans looked so confusing to her. Living for a year amongst the humans, she found them odd. But none the less they bring out her playful side. A human once gave her ice cream and it made her excited as she found herself falling for sweets. She ended up working in a candy store to learn more about humans. Her boss Dimitri, an immortal man takes care of her and guards her. He is pervy but he wouldn’t allowed anything to happen to cheshire. She is a strong woman, but as she wanders the world she doesn’t want to go back but knows they will come for her. Since she was s slave catcher in the army.


Ravatinex/Rava
(Starting PL 200**)
(Age Cap/Death is 250, Retiring Age is 175)

Starting Planet: Ravinex or Rogenve, the Sister, Slave planet.

Description and History:
Rava’s are a race from the eastern galaxy that was known for taking over planets in the system. For years they took planets that had resources that they needed for making people their slaves. The Ravatinex people started the slave trade, selling off races to the highest bidder. They created the marks and brandings, as they prize rare creatures like half breeds. They are ruled by 'Tzar Ragneko' a cruel and ruthless ruler that only cares for his people. His sympathy is only for them, and for other races he shows zero sense of compassion, or concern. They are based off of animals crossed with humans, features that are similar. In their basic form, they look more humanistic, with minor features, representing the animal breed that has been imbedded upon their DNA.

They live in a society of ranks. Royals, nobles, soldiers, merchants, and commoners. They tend to not mix ranks unless forced, each part of the planet known as Ravatinex is home to a rank. In battle for wars the race is known to be rutheless taking on animal forms to kill their enemies. But the royals and nobles are able to warp reality to make their victims feel the ultimate pain or see something different before they are killed. Ships have been sent out to all sections of the universe to gain new races to sell and conqour. They are the rivals of the changelings, but at the same time the same race that gives them their soldiers.

They are keen on collecting, such as saiyans. They prized their warriors for slave fights. The royals and nobles were always amused by torture. But there are some that are starting to rise that wish for the slave trade to be done with, the rebels are of all ranks. They are fighting in secret to bring down the king and his cold ways of ruling. Many races are starting to rise against them causing nothing but death to those they care for. Though the race shows to be very cold, some of them have the hearts to rise up and show kindness to those whom have been mistreated or they trust.
The Color Moon of their planets arrive 4 times a year for each season. Those nights of when the seasons are to change, the people have a festival in their animal forms. This is a day no race dare attack them, their animal forms go crazy and will attack any intruder in the festival. Rava are the only ones able to attend. On other planets, the colored moons are when they go on an all out assault. It is almost impossible to stop them just like the saiyan’s ozaroo. But cutting off their tails has no effect, it just upsets them more...

Abilities:

Power Up [x1.1 powerlevel]
Requirements: None
Description: Basic to every race. It involves finding energy within ones self and then forcing it out of the Dan Tien and into circulation around the body. This produces whipping aura and is accompanied by the sound of raw energy destroying molecules in the air.



Shape shift
Requirements: None
Description: The Ravatinex people have, naturally, had their blood imbued with that of select animals. In this case, they are given the right to, at will, transform into the animal that has been embedded into the DNA. This gives no specific advantages, nor disadvantages as far as combat goes, and is mainly used as a means for better blending in with the environment at will. The Rava can only transform into their specific animal form, and nothing else.

Mind Reading (Touch)
Requirements: Any Rank
Description: A basic ability that is born into every one of the race of Rava's. They are given abilities on reading minds by simply touching the skin, or coming in contact with another person, physically.

Mind Reading (Sense)
Requirements: Any Rank, 15,000 Ki Control, Ki Sense.
Description: A basic ability that is born into every one of the race of Rava's. They are given abilities on reading minds now, not only by touch, but by sensing the wavelengths and emotions given through training their previously usable Mind Reading abilities.

Invisible Binding
Requirements: Any Rank, (Once per fight)
Description: This technique is a commonly used way of taking control of a foe, dominating them by, usually, asphyxiation. The bindings can also be used to pin limbs to objects by using their ki, allowing, normally wrists or ankles to be bound to an object, or in some cases, frozen in place. This binding lasts for a maximum of two posts in a fight, in which case will be broken due to a imbedded rule within the DNA of this race.

Ki Whip "Bloody Whip of Torment"
Requirements: Any Rank
Description: This ability is a commonly used way of taking control of a foe, dominating them by, usually, lashing out at them with stinging cracks. The whip takes on a color, similar to that of the users aura, or in most cases their personality.


Warp of Realms/Warped Reality
Requirements: Noble or Royalty Ranks, 200,000 Power level, Admin/Mod approval, Once per Fight.
Description: This technique is only taught to those of immense power, and within the higher classes of the race. It is hidden potential within their bloodlines that allow them to breach the minds of their victims so severely, that they can cause hallucinations, and even force physical and energetic damage by simply thinking, and implanting their own thoughts into the minds of the enemy. However, by doing this, their minds become weaker and weaker with each growing moment, leaving them extremely vulnerable on their own. With each post, the user can cause greater, inflicting damage, but if held too long, they also can cause their own, fragile state of mind to implode and bring themselves into a state of being brain dead for the rest of their lives.



Transformations:


Raviger [x2.5 power level]
Requirements: A colored Moon, 12,000 PL, Anger
Description: In this form, the users body is amplified to rival that of a saiyans Oozaru form. They become more beast-like than before, completely taking on the form of their specific animal. It is, however, much larger in size when this happens, in which case their power is boosted by more than double. No aura is around them, nor needed to be shown. Removing ones tail isn't as effective as against an Oozaru, either, in which case it only enrages the beast even more.

Feral Raviger [x3.5 Power level]
Requirements: 100,000 PL, Must first be unlocked during a fight and have Raviger form unlocked already.
Description: The Feral form is by far more shocking in appearance, as opposed to the awe-striking, fearsom previous form. In this state, the Ravatinex stays in their normal form, but their physical, animal figure becomes more distinct. If fur is normally on their body, it lengthens, for example. If there a scales here or there on their body, they spread even further, and so on and so forth.

Warped Raviger[x5.5 Strength OR Ki Power, x6 Speed, x4 Ki Control]
Requirements: 250,000 PL, Commoner, Merchant or Soldier Rank, Unbearable Rage.
Description: This form is the most feared among all of the Ravatinex race. The Nobles and Royals have strived for this for so long, but found absolutely no way of obtaining this form. It is in the more common blood that this inner beast can eventually be unleashed. This form is somewhat darker, and more hellish than any previous forms. Like their Feral Raviger form, the user cannot exceed the size of their humanistic appearance. However, their bodies are now completely overrun by the animal characteristics. They are a nightmare, and their power is obtained much faster than most other forms.

Other Information

Races they can breed with: Saiyans, humans, Demons, Voiders, Makyo-Jin.

* = Commoner
2x* = Merchant
3x* = Soldier
4x* = Noble
5x* = Royalty



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PostSubject: Re: Cheshire Ravanim (done/custom race)   Cheshire Ravanim (done/custom race) EmptyFri Sep 09, 2011 11:21 pm

Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Cheshire Ravanim (done/custom race)   Cheshire Ravanim (done/custom race) EmptySat Sep 10, 2011 12:35 am

Oh, and if you want, you can make one of the dominating techs perm, since atm, only Tuffles can permanatley control opponents...
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PostSubject: Re: Cheshire Ravanim (done/custom race)   Cheshire Ravanim (done/custom race) EmptySat Sep 10, 2011 10:41 am

that sounds good. XD
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