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DragonBall: Shattered Hope
Ever since the universe was destroyed, King Yemma agreed to allow rebuilding. Will you aid in the construction of the Neo DragonVerse? Or will you rule the planets? Or will you just destroy it? Hope not!
Thus ends the story of Dragon Ball Shattered Hope III. But wait! This isn't the end! The story isn't over!
Over ten playable races, forty quests and techniques, and growing all the time! Five hundred and seventy-five years after the metaseries' conclusion, the Saiyans have returned. Earthlings are on the universal stage. Majins have created their own planet. Original races like Solar Saiyans and The Seraphim are present, returning from times forgotten. Rule the galaxy or save it with your dying breath. Gather the Dragon Balls and shape the universe to your whim. Your imagination's the limit.
Dragon Ball IV: A New Hoap!
...No one really knows why it's spelled like that.
At any rate, we have cutthroat battles while holding the same wit and comedy as Toriyama's famous work.
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Subject: The Wraith Sun Nov 20, 2011 11:55 am
Basic Character Information: Name:HieiYamatoEnmaOni Takiru Ourouh -Nickname: The Wraith; Reincarnation of the First Saiyan; The Monarch Age: Archaic; Unknown Gender: Male Race: Pure-Blooded Saiyan Alignment: Neutral
Looks: Takiru is a fairly short Saiyan, though this is hardly noticeable when his hair is spotted. Actually, he is only five feet and seven inches tall, but his hairdo adds roughly another seven inches, giving him the appearance of a man of six foot two stature. Weighing roughly one hundred and forty seven pounds, Takiru truly isn't expected to be an eligible wielder of the Legendary Chromosome. Even if he appears to be short and stout, he is actually very masculine if you ever catch him in the nude. With chiseled muscles and near perfect bone structure, Takiru is one of the top breeds the Saiyan race has ever produced. With flawlessly sculpted pectorals and an extremely attractive six pack, washboard abdomen, Takiru is not only a pure blooded specimen, but as you might be able to tell, he is also a sexually appealing being to all races and genders. Not a single muscle in his body goes un-toned, meaning he is at the peak of his physical condition. His hair is jet black, streaked with slate grey, which goes extremely well with his violet eyes. His third eye is actually a crimson shade, though since it is not an average eye, this would come off normal to people who know his past.
The attire of Takiru is pretty bland, unlike his abnormal appearance. It consists of, for the most part, a white headband strapped around his third and demonic eye, and a full, oil slicked black outfit. He has a white attachment around his neck, which can easily be pulled off. He wears a long sleeved black shirt and black pants, along with Saiyan boots. Depending on the occasion, this outfit can change drastically. For example, when he is on Vegeta, he might wear Saiyan armor, but for battle, he usually strips all tops besides a varying colored wife beater, just to show off his muscles. These are just some basic outfits, but he will wear anything if there is a special occasion, often sporting a dragon bearing ceremonial kimono for any special activities. He also changes the position of his sword, wear it might be placed across his back, his hip, or even at his side. He doesn't do anything special with his clothes, but he does not look to draw attention to himself.
Personality: Takiru is an enigma, so to speak. He is the wildcard out of every group, and no one ever knows what goes on through his head or what he'll do next. Seemingly unpredictable, Takiru can alter his personality and emotions at will. which makes him come off as bi-polar, but truly, he just doesn't give a shit, and changes up the way he acts every couple of minutes or even days. He shows lots of pride in being a Saiyan, let alone one with the Legendary Chromosome, and hates anyone who hates Saiyans. He is not evil, nor is he good, but prefers a peaceful central in between both, which allows him to have his own opinion about everything and pick and choose what side he wants to and join and when he will join and or leave them. With these particular mannerisms, some may not find Takiru as trustworthy, but as a matter of fact, he is extremely loyal once he is offered something of extreme value, or is proven to that someone is worthy. Other than that, he does what ever he wants, when he wants to do it.
A major chink in the mental frame of Takiru's conscious armor is that he can be extremely antisocial at times. This isn't considered a perk or a disadvantage, but sometimes, a guy just likes to sit by himself and think about things and life, possibly plot a heist, or maybe lead a criminal investigations team. He can be considered a man doing an inside job, but truly, he doesn't enjoy taking instructions from someone for no reason, as he believes you shouldn't follow people, you should be a leader amongst them, because no one knows where they are going. That is his philosophy, and so far in life, he has followed it and stuck to it entirely. He thinks respect should be earned, not handed out like candy, and therefore, most people's first impression of him his disrespectful and/or rude.
Basic Race Information: Race Name: Legendary Super Saiyan Racial Trait: Angry Upheaval Transformation Number: 5/8 Planet of Residence: Vegeta
Skill Information: Ki Color: Turquoise Techniques:
Spoiler:
Name: Xiahiw [Conscious] Description: Xiahiw is an advanced form of telekinesis that requires no Ki at all, though it uses Ki. Whenever some Is within one hundred meters of the user, Ki around their brain branches out into invisible tendrils, immediately attaching to anyone who's head was unlucky to enter this vicinity. It is completely undetectable, even by scouter, but the user has access to the victims' memory as if it were a library. They can learn about the victim's past experiences, read their thoughts, anything stowed within their mind, etc. and they won't even notice anything happening. The user can also pick and choose which mind to listen to at a time, as listening to multiple thoughts at once can be a burden, so they can clog the tendril if needbe.
Name: Tenka-dama [Spiked Ball] Description: This move is a ki bomb, made up of three initial attacks in one. The first, believe it or not, is a feint. The user will throw the ball with all their might at the target, but it doesn't move extremely fast and only takes 1,000 stamina to dodge the feint no matter what the situation. After the feint is dodged, the bomb can be controlled via middle and index fingers, where they can cause the ball soar this way and that, impaling the opponent and puncturing them all over, and/or they can eventually clench their fist, causing the ball to explode and sending about ten ki spikes launching in every direction, but they can be redirected by use of a finger; one for each spike until they hit some solid and detonate with a C1 amount of concussion.
Name: Ame [Rain] Description: The user will strike a pose, as if to do an explosive wave, but initially, they release a large, transparent cloud into the sky made of ki, at which point they can snap, and millions of needles made of ki will downpour onto the area or opponent(s) desired. The cloud can move around, and these needles can draw blood if they go in deep enough, but for the most part, each one has the equivalent power of three stings from a japanese hornet, so millions of these do tons of damage. It covers a thirty meter radius, and lasts for three whole posts of the user's after the initial release of the "cloud".
Name: Taegatai [Excruciating] Description: The user will simply point their index finger at a being and every single cell within their body will feel as if it is on fire; causing them to experience extreme epilepsy as they undergo excruciating pain. It is highly unlikely for this technique to leave long term damage on the opponent, and is sometimes difficult to keep control on, as the user must keep their finger pointing at the target for this to work, and the target jerks around as the technique is being done, forcing the user to concentrate.
Name: Prizim [Prism] Description: A faintly transparent, three dimensional prism-like shape will appear between the user's hands, and begin to draw in and refract light in a high powered, concentrated beam. The beam launched from the prism will be an array of pigmentation that can burn anything it comes in contact with, completely incinerating anything in it's path.
Name: Shinra Tensei [Almighty Push] Description: This creates an invisble barrier around the user, deflecting anything and everything it comes in contact with, blowing it away. It takes half of the ki used in the attack used on the user to deflect it, but this can also be used as an offensive technique to blow an opponent back. The more ki used in the offensive version, the farther the target will be sent flying.
Name: Kore wa suparuta no arimasu [This is SPARTA!] Description: The user charge lots of ki into their foot, and does a frontal kick into the opponent's solar plexus, shattering their rib cage if it connects.
Name: Dandou Higyou [Ballistic Beacon] Description: This move is the patented technique of the Legendary Super Saiyan, Takiru. First, he extends one arm, and graps his wrist, creating a perfectly spherical orb of ki. This ki is a deep emerald shade, and lets off a faint glow. After he throws the orb, there are several things it can do. First off, it can be controlled so it lands multiple hits, and/or explodes, it can shoot off countless smaller energy balls, and finally it can also absorb ki, which happens every time someone is hit with it. 1,000 ki is gained after every successful hit.
Name: Coz-Can [Cosmic Cannon] Description: This is a variant of the Galik Gun, which stands for Galactic Gunfire. This move is performed almost exactly the same, but the beam is green, and a couple inches thinner circumference-wise. Other than that, it is shot fromeither or both hands, and is a fairly powerful energy wave.
Name: Sākasu [Circus] Description: The user extends both hands and connects both index fingers and thumbs as if to do a final buster, but then forms a jade orb made of ki in between this handseal, and begins to launch twenty to fifty average sized beams out of it, where they can be redirected at will, severely injuring the target with great accuracy.
Name: Hōka [Gunfire] Description: The user bends down their pinky and ring finger while putting their middle and index fingers together, extending their thumb so that their hand appears as a gun. Bullet-like shapes of ki can be launched from the tips of their index and ring fingers, which have the velocity and impact of a human bullet times one thousand, making them able to pierce any type of material and making the "bullets" just that much more deadly.
Name: Kaio-ken [Fist of the World King] Description: Bumps the user's statistics up by a multiplier for a certain period of time depending on the variation of which it is used.
Name: Terekineshisu [Telekinesis] Description: The ability to move objects with the user's mind.
Name: Yajirushi Omo [Arrow Ki] Description: The user launches a beam that has a triangular tip, as if it is an arrow, and it has no special effect besides the fact that it can cut, but other than that, it is just like any other ki beam.
Name: Naiha [Implosion] Description: The user charges ki into an inanimate object, and this can be left in it for years. By a simple gritting of the user's teeth, the said object(s) will implode violently, completely collapsing upon and destroying itself.
Name: Ruubikk Kyuubu [Rubik's Cube] Description: This move seems to be a direct variant from the move called "Prism". The user creates a large cube that surrounds an opponent, where lines appear throughout it, leaving nine squares on each side of the cube. Each square traps and refracts a little light, at different angles, so each side of colors is mixed up. The user shifts their hands violently, as if playing with a Rubik's Cube, and the cube jerks and rotates rapidly, grinding and squashing the opponent up until the only thing left of them is blood and bone dust.
Name: Hien [Flying Swallow] Description: The user gathers ki into both hands, so they glow a faint pigmentation. The ki, though looking like normal ki, actually allows the user to use their hands as if they were razor blades. This lets the user saw through things, cut stuff up, and stab others, etc. the list goes on.
Name: Ranmyaku Daitou [Chaos Claymore] Description: The user throws an energy ball, and just like a spread energy wave, it blows up so to speak, sending about a hundred smaller plates of ki all over a one hundred meter radius, so that when pressure is exerted upon one, it detonates violently, sending out a massive concussion and setting off all of the other claymores rapid fire. Each and everyone can be detonated by will of the user, whilst some may be delayed from exploding.
Name: Genki Dama [Spirit Bomb] Description: Users of the Spirit Bomb gather huge amounts of energy from all chosen surrounding life forms, and conduct that energy into a massive sphere of astounding destructive power. Energy takes the visual form of sparkling, glittering wisps when adding to the mass. The creation of the attack promotes a calm breeze away from the bomb, which turns into a strong continuous gale and expels colorful bands or radiation of Northern Lights-esque aurora. When used it is quite swift, and if the user is not careful of it, the Spirit Bomb could absolutely obliterate a planet.
Name: Shunkan Kai Kai Idō [Instant Movement Transmission] Description: Touching their left index and middle fingers to their forehead, the user can instantaneously transport great distance in a matter of microseconds. This can be from one point to another, from living world to other world, or planet to planet if the user wishes. This can be performed in an instant, and doesn't require a whole lot of concentration.
Items: Katana, Neutral Nimbus Cloud (mix between normal and dark nimbus cloud, appearing as a very bright, almost white color)
Transformations:
Sage Oozaru When a full moon is in session or a powerball is used, the first sign of the legendary chromosome sparks and begins to blossom. Unlike the normal great ape form, the user bulks about fifty person larger than that, and as fur begins to accumulate all over the Saiyan's body, it turns a goldish color. This form gives the user immense strength and speed at the same time, and also has a thicker tail, making it doubly hard to stop this form from rampaging, taking five hundred thousand ki alone to sever. Also, the Saiyan cannot control themselves at all in this form until their power level reaches at least one million.
Stat Requirement: 50,000 PL Stat Gain: 100,000 PL and Stamina
Apocryphal Super Saiyan The first step towards becoming a Legendary Super Saiyan, the apocryphal super saiyan differs slightly from the average Saiyan's false super saiyan. Their muscles bulge slightly more than they normally would, and their hair turns a deep cobalt shade. Their speed and strength increase exponentially, and they are already just as powerful as a full fledged super saiyan. If only looks could kill; people quiver in fear by your mere breathing.
Stat Requirement: 300,000 PL Stat Gain: 750,000 All Stats
Allegorical Super Saiyan The Legendary Chromosome has finally surfaced at last; the first stage on the Saiyan's path is unleashed. Something extremely frustrating has happened, and anger courses through their blood; invading the Saiyan's veins. Death becomes the only option for their enemies, as their body has removed the physical barrier from it, allowing them to accomplish feats others can only dream of. With muscles bulked up even more from the Apocryphal Super Saiyan, their hairs turn a violent shade of gold and they become extremely powerful, causing people to tremble at the sound of their voice.
Stat Requirement: 750,000 PL Stat Gain: 3,500,000 All Stats
Cryptic Super Saiyan The Saiyan is just inches away from achieving the most covenant transformation of all time, as their muscles swell and lightning envelopes their body as their hair sprouts in all different directions. Strength is the core of this transformation, and though it's not much, their speed is retarded for the duration of this form, but they become strong enough to shatter mountains just by flicking them, and the mere sound of their name causes people to undergo psychiatric infarctions.
Stat Requirement: 5,000,000 Stat Gain: 10,000,000
Legendary Super Saiyan This is the end result as the full power of the Legendary Super Saiyan is unleashed. Humongous craters are created by the Legendary Saiyan's foot steps; their breathing creating tornado's. Their power is seemingly bottomless, as every stat surges, the Saiyan has finally unlocked the power of the very first super saiyan, giving them the will of their ancestors. Their body bulks up as a yellow-green aura wraps around them in every which way as their hair stands up and goes wild, sporting the same colors as their aura. The Legendary Super Saiyan rubs off as immortal, as he is huge, fast, and holds within them limitless power beyond one's wildest dreams. Beings tremble the Saiyan's heartbeat as hate, not anger, but pure loathing courses through their veins, creating the perfect warrior specimen.
Stat Requirement: 50,000,000 Stat Gain: 10 Times All Stats
Background: History: It was millions and millions of years ago...countless millenniums before the history of mankind...there was an ape...a golden, shimmering ape of endless power. It was said that he was the one that created the universe, but this was thought to be a legend. As Years went on and this ape passed, tales of the "First Super Saiyan" became infamous on the Planet dedicated to him himself, Vegeta. Soon, the rumor of the Legendary Super Saiyan had been altered from the original, saying every one million Saiyans equaled the power of one Legendary Super Saiyan who possessed the same DNA as the first super saiyan. Of course, that is why the myth was called the Legendary Super Saiyan, because it was just that.
No one truly thought anything of it until Broly showed up. His power level at birth topped King Vegeta's, of course, no one knew this at the time. Broly never reproduced, so it was thought that the Legendary chromosome was gone forever...until that one peaceful day...
Caine and Nach, two Saiyans hailing from two of the most wealthy families of all the planet had gotten intimate, and Caine ended up impregnating Nach. After they waited the nine months, their baby, who was to be named after his father, was born at exactly midnight on December Twenty-Fifth. He didn't come out crying, kicking, or screaming as all the others...but instead...he came out with a tempted, sinister smirk upon his face. Some predicted it before it actually happened, but word got out to the king about this mysterious child, and he was taken from his parents, stowed in a space pod, and shipped off to a small planet to truly test his powers...to destroy it.
His course was off, however, and the child would stay, suspended within the darkness of aerospace, just waiting for something to happen. It never occurred to him that his home had been destroyed, but by the time the neodragonverse had been created, Vegeta's gravitational pull dragged him back to the planet to start over with all the other Saiyans. This was, however, impossible. He suffered brain damage and was only a child, so thus was given several nicknames. Disappearances began to take place, and all fingers pointed to the "devil child". He was shunned from the whole race, but he wouldn't give up.
Takiru would live on for years before he finally developed a name he could call his own. He hadn't really learned about his legendary bloodline, but others, as usual, assumed the worst. He grows up on Vegeta even to this day, trying, just struggling to survive the harsh conditions he was force upon. He plans to strike his revenge one day, however, on the people who destroyed the original Vegeta, and the sequel Vegeta. His parents were gone. He couldn't remember a damn thing, but little did he know, it was his ancestors themselves that destroyed the original Vegeta...
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